Translation request

    • Pasiv
      Pasiv
      Bronze
      Joined: 24.03.2008 Posts: 515
      Hi.
      Can someone who speaks English as a native language could have a look at the following and tell me if everything is ok in terms of grammar?

      This is the text that will be used to promote my computer game on Steam, and it will be read by a professional reader, so important to me to be correct ...


      The World was corrupted by red plague
      Raging socialism took control
      Lawlessness and theft become common.
      Hungry for blood of whole nation sadists
      without reason and human dignity
      were parasiting on healthy body of a society.

      And when we all thought that there is no hope...
      The hope has arrived!
      One man said: ENOUGH!
      One man declared a WAR.
      And he will not stop as long as...

      ANY
      SINGLE
      SOCIALIST
      IS STILL
      BREATHING.
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